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Sugary,sweet,tasty yum we all enjoy junk food. Most kids would have an opinion if junk food should be banned from school, but in an article they are saying junk food should be banned, is it a smart idea or not? Junk food can still be eaten, if your not eating it at school you can still have it at home. It can still be eaten, schools can't decide what you eat, and getting food from school pays for activities. Who's going to by an apple instead of a candy bar?
Sugary,sweet,tasty yum we all enjoy junk food. Most kids would have an opinion if junk food should be banned from school, but in an article they are saying junk food should be banned, is it a smart idea or not? Junk food can still be eaten, if your not eating it at school you can still have it at home. It can still be eaten, schools can't decide what you eat, and getting food from school pays for activities. Who's going to by an apple instead of a candy bar?
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Bullying is a serious issue, many kids commit suicide because of bullies, they don't think that little words hurt but they can. A young teenage girl hanged herself just because kids at school didn't agree with her decision, does that make sense? Laws about harassment have been made but it does not always stop it, kids can commit suicide from bullies, they can become socially awkward, and they might even be scared to go to school because they don't want to face bullies. This is in the article, Are Bullies Criminals?, this shouldn't be happening to normal young teens at schools. Bullies, they can be kids, ordinary kids, kids that are seen just walking down the street, nobody should be let free after bullying somebody without a punishment like a criminal.
Bullying is a serious issue, many kids commit suicide because of bullies, they don't think that little words hurt but they can. A young teenage girl hanged herself just because kids at school didn't agree with her decision, does that make sense? Laws about harassment have been made but it does not always stop it, kids can commit suicide from bullies, they can become socially awkward, and they might even be scared to go to school because they don't want to face bullies. This is in the article, Are Bullies Criminals?, this shouldn't be happening to normal young teens at schools. Bullies, they can be kids, ordinary kids, kids that are seen just walking down the street, nobody should be let free after bullying somebody without a punishment like a criminal.
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People have always wanted to go to space they believe it would be a great adventure but for 20,000 and not a ride back no thank you. Going into space would be cool but with everything that goes along with it is a big decision. Why would somebody pay 20,000 dollars to go up and it could be dangerous, the forces of motion could be an experience with forces of motion that are far too extreme for most people. In the article, Your Next Vacation: Outer Space?, by scholastic scope they are offering trips to space. Going to Disney, snowboarding, visiting family, or space, space shouldn't be in the same category as a vacation, scientist still haven't fully discovered everything going on in space sending people up their for fun isn't a intelligent idea.
People have always wanted to go to space they believe it would be a great adventure but for 20,000 and not a ride back no thank you. Going into space would be cool but with everything that goes along with it is a big decision. Why would somebody pay 20,000 dollars to go up and it could be dangerous, the forces of motion could be an experience with forces of motion that are far too extreme for most people. In the article, Your Next Vacation: Outer Space?, by scholastic scope they are offering trips to space. Going to Disney, snowboarding, visiting family, or space, space shouldn't be in the same category as a vacation, scientist still haven't fully discovered everything going on in space sending people up their for fun isn't a intelligent idea.